Hello selina you have described this very well and it is very detailed but maybe you could change the color because it is very hard to read and maybe slow it dome because i had to pause it to read it Good job From lennox
Hi Selina,I really like your slideshow about your cross country fun run.I can see you put lots of efferect into it.It looks really fun.It reminds me of when we do our cross country.I think you did a great job well done.
hik selina, my name is miracle i like how you added brown splotches as mud, next time you could change the back round or text colour because its hard to read.
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Hello selina
ReplyDeleteyou have described this very well and it is very detailed
but maybe you could change the color because it is very hard to read and maybe slow it dome because i had to pause it to read it
Good job
From lennox
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Deletei wall try if i have time
DeleteHello selina
ReplyDeleteyour cross country looks very fun. Next time change the colour of the writing because it is really hard to read it
From Luka.
ok Luka i well try if i have time
DeleteHi Selina,I really like your slideshow about your cross country fun run.I can see you put lots of efferect into it.It looks really fun.It reminds me of when we do our cross country.I think you did a great job well done.
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ReplyDeleteYour blog post looks interesting to read.Next time you should but more details in your blog post.
Kathleen
Hi selina my name is zayvia i like your background nice job
ReplyDeletehik selina, my name is miracle i like how you added brown splotches as mud, next time you could change the back round or text colour because its hard to read.
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