Kia ora. My name is Dev and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti I like how you did one cold morning. I like watching youtube too. I was wondering if you could fix up where it said My mum was and Dad?
Kia ora. My name is Miracle, I attend Te Hapara School in Gisborne I like how you said one cold morning instead of one morning.. I was wondering if you could fix up where it said My mum was and Dad?
Hi my name is myra I attend at te hapara school in gisborne i like how you did one cold morning also like watching sometimes too.I was wondering if you could fix up where it said My mum was and Dad?
Kia ora. My name is Sophie and I attend at Te hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I really liked how you made it . This reminds me of when I had a sleepover .next time you could put more capitals in Ka rawe sophie
Kia ora. My name is Kejon and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I really liked your sleepover poem. This reminds me of when I went for a sleepover at my aunt's house Next time you could choose another colour for you sleepover poem?Ka pai ! Kejon.
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Kia ora. My name is Dev and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti
ReplyDeleteI like how you did one cold morning. I like watching youtube too. I was wondering if you could fix up where it said My mum was and Dad?
hi my name is Ciahrna i think you should fix it up
ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Miracle, I attend Te Hapara School in Gisborne
ReplyDeleteI like how you said one cold morning instead of one morning.. I was wondering if you could fix up where it said My mum was and Dad?
Hi my name is myra I attend at te hapara school in gisborne i like how you did one cold morning also like watching sometimes too.I was wondering if you could fix up where it said My mum was and Dad?
ReplyDeleteThat sounded fun, what was the name of the movie you watched?
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ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Sophie and I attend at Te hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.
I really liked how you made it . This reminds me of when I had a sleepover .next time you could put more capitals in Ka rawe sophie
Kia ora. My name is Kejon and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your sleepover poem. This reminds me of when I went for a sleepover at my aunt's house Next time you could choose another colour for you sleepover poem?Ka pai ! Kejon.